Thursday, January 28, 2010


I have been through a lot in this life of mine, not all of it taking place in Carhartts. I have learned to accept various life lessons I have discovered through moral or immoral methods. Trauma has also impacted me pretty hard and with that I have turned to writing, and most of all my poetry to help me get it out instead of letting it build. So with that I will post some of my own work so you may further understand the feelings I have felt, or what maybe even everyone else has felt at some point in their lives.




"Begin War..."

The stench of a thousand corpses floods my nostrils thrusting the day's intake adn whatever was left in the pit of my stomach through the cracks of my teeth. Choking and pleading with my throat to swallow it back down, my teeth fail and release the acidic dwellings of my paunch onto the cobble walk. I gasp for air...


The view is paralyzing.
No sight,
nothing but the wretched stench
that has already claimed my nutrition.
I shuffle my feet to only hear a clink and clank.
The ground is uneven and cracked
with the feel of rubble that shifts with movement.

A liquid trickles down my countenance.
Thicker than water, lighter than sweat.

What has happened to me?



"Stupid Prompt"

I am not Tony Hoagland, so fuck
this attempt to scribe as another scribe
did to his scroll so many years ago.
I will not Rhyme or Capitalize
words that need no such thing.
To write a prompt asking this, is asking
a drunkard to give away his bottle, however
it may change him, he will not become
him.

I am a poet because of my style
such as a designer is to his feng shui...
I drink out my own bottle, and will
not be fed by the bottle Tony Hoaglands's
Bitch of a mother used to feed him.
I have nothing but Respect and Courtesy
for Mr. Hoagland, but to take the pen
of another, would be to kill my sould, and accept
another...

2 comments:

  1. You are a very good writer! We need a "Like-It" button like on facebook! You left me wondering ... What did happen to you? Were you in war? Was it blood? Care to elucidate?

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  2. Love love love it. I took a poetry class last semester when I was sucking at life at NIC in Cda and I kept thinking of what the teacher would have looked like had she read these. It was a priceless scene in my head and I laughed for a good minute. I agree with above you have got some tallent and I dig your style.

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